Where the Heck Wednesday: Graham Smith

Wednesday has rolled around again and this week I’m delighted to welcome my good friend and fellow Caffeine Nights author Graham Smith, who shares some fascinating facts about Cumbria.  Thanks for taking part, Graham!

Book titles: I Know Your Secret and Matching the Evidence

Author: Graham Smith

Setting: The English county of Cumbria

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Location Location Location…

Apologies for the somewhat cheesy headline, but for this guest post I thought I’d talk about the locations I’ve chosen for my DI Harry Evans novels, novellas and short stories.

I’ve set them in Cumbria which includes the fantastically beautiful Lake District, the Northern Pennines and hundreds of miles of coastline. Cumbria is home to the city of Carlisle, countless small towns and villages, a plethora of wide open spaces consisting of moorland, rolling fells, deep lakes and small forests. (Many of these are good places to dump a body which is always important for us crime writers.)

Stepping outside the City of Carlisle, the towns and villages are tourist traps, ports, market towns. Tourism is huge business in the Lake District, but Cumbria also plays home to a nuclear power station, a naval base and factories which produce everything from crisp packets to biscuits via tyres. Farming is a huge part of the community and there are many dairy, sheep and cattle farms throughout the region although the hills do mean there’s a distinct lack of arable farming in the area. (This diversity of location gives me the opportunity to write a rural or city based story without having to move my characters away from their usual stomping ground as the whole of Cumbria is their patch.)

The M6 motorway and countless A and B roads afford access around the county, but there’s also many single track roadways when you get off the beaten track. (For a crime writer these are great for allowing speedy progress or causing tension-inducing displays as required by the story.)

Cumbria has an amazing history which includes the Romans, the reiving families of the borders and the many wars between Scotland and England. All of this makes for a landscape which is rich in varied influences and ancient cultures. (West Cumbria had its own unique language which still shows in the speech patterns of those local to the area.)

Another governing factor in my choosing Cumbria and the Lake District as my location of choice is the fact it is an area which many readers from the north of England and Scotland are likely to have visited. Most readers like to read about places they know and as such it was something of a no-brainer for me to choose to write about and area I’m local to and fairly familiar with. (Don’t tell anyone, but one of the main reasons I chose Cumbria is so I can have a nice day out in the Lake District and call it research.)

A lesser but still important consideration was that very few people are setting crime stories in Cumbria. All the other cities close to me have already been claimed by those who know them far better than I.

With all these attributes available in a location so close to my home in Scotland (I live just three miles from Cumbria) I’d have had to have been very brave or foolish to choose anywhere else.

I might be a coward, but I’m not an idiot!


Graham Smith is married with a young son. A time served joiner, he has built bridges and houses, dug drains, and slated roofs to make ends meet. Since Christmas 2000 he has been manager of a busy hotel and wedding venue near Gretna Green, Scotland.

 An avid fan of crime fiction since being given one of Enid Blyton’s Famous Five books at the age of eight, he has also been a regular reviewer and interviewer for the well-respected website Crimesquad.com since 2009.

He is the author of four books featuring DI Harry Evans and the Cumbrian Major Crimes Team.

The Red Umbrella

cropped-redumbrella3.jpgAuthors sometimes get their inspiration from the strangest places, and I guess I’m no exception.  A few months back I was staring blankly at the picture I use as a cover photo on various blogs, websites, and social media, when the first tendrils of a story began to wrap themselves around my mind.  A couple of hours and much scribbling later, I had the bare bones of a story called, perhaps unsurprisingly, ‘The Red Umbrella’.

In it, I give one possible explanation for how that umbrella ended up, battered and broken, lying in a gutter, never to be used again.  It’s a sad little story, and not much like my usual flippant style, but don’t blame me – it’s what the photo told me to write!

And the good news is, you can now read that story too because it’s appearing at Spelk Fiction today.  For those of you who don’t already know, Spelk is a great little fiction magazine specialising in short and flash fiction in all kinds of genres, but always with something unusual or interesting to say.

I hope you enjoy ‘The Red Umbrella’, and while you’re at it, take time to explore some of the other stuff on the site.  Bet you won’t be disappointed!

Where the Heck Wednesday: Jackie Baldwin

Wednesday has rolled around again and this week I’m delighted to welcome debut crime author Jackie Baldwin, whose novel was released the week after mine!  Over to you, Jackie, and the Scottish town of Dumfries…

Book title: Dead Man’s Prayer

Author: Jackie Baldwin

Setting: Dumfries, Scotland

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My crime novel, Dead Man’s Prayer is set in the bustling market town of Dumfries in wild and beautiful Dumfries and Galloway, SW Scotland. Admittedly, I was rather swimming against the tide by not setting it in a Scottish city but I have lived in this area most of my life and I speak its language, both literally and in the wider sense.

I went to the local Benedictine Convent School. The nuns were lovely but back in those days, the religious education was fairly extreme which is why I often seem to explore themes such as guilt and redemption in my work and why I chose a former practising RC priest as my main character. After the Convent closed the building became a temporary home for Dumfries Sheriff Court. I can’t tell you how surreal it felt when I rose to my feet as a young defence solicitor in one of my old classrooms. It is perhaps not surprising that the very same building features in one of the scenes of my novel.

I had always wanted to write a novel but would put family, work, in fact just about everything, ahead of realising that dream. Fate stepped in when Jules Horne, a writer in residence was appointed to the Region and invited applications for mentoring. Once accepted, I couldn’t possibly let her down so this novel, started so tentatively with a blurb, was dragged kicking and screaming into the world.

One piece of advice was to try and get a photograph of someone who captures the image in your head of what your main character looks like. This caused great hilarity one summer as I effectively stalked a German tourist by positioning the children in front of him trying to get a good shot of his face in the background.

Jules also got me into Dumfries Police Station for the day where I was shown everything including the armoury (very exciting!) I also learned a lot of detail about police procedures which is the kind of texture needed for authenticity.

The main difficulty I found in writing about Dumfries was that I didn’t want to give offence by mentioning real names if my character was saying or thinking something disparaging about it. Accordingly, I have taken a bit of licence and renamed a few areas or roads as well as the Church where a murder takes place. Funnily, enough, I was contacted by a Frank Farrell to say that as far as he is aware he is the only Frank Farrell in Dumfries! Fortunately, he was charming and saw the funny side although his family have been giving him some stick about it.

Dumfries and Galloway has such a great range of potential characters ranging from the landed Gentry to artists and poets. There are many towns and villages, all with their own unique character. We also have castles, islands, beaches and forests. In short, 1001 places to dump a body!


Jackie Baldwin is a former solicitor specializing in family and criminal law. She now practices as a hypnotherapist in Dumfries. Married, with two grown up children and two dogs, she is an active member of Moffat Crime Writers’ Group. When she is not writing she loves to walk her two dogs in one of the local forests. She also loves all things sci-fi. Her debut crime novel, ‘Dead Man’s Prayer,’ was published by Killer Reads on 2nd September 2016.

You can find Dead Man’s Prayer here.

Music to write books by…

Raise the Blade FrontToday I’m featured over at Sarah Ward’s excellent Crimepieces blog as part of her regular ‘Music to Write Books By’ series.  Although I don’t often listen to music while I write, that doesn’t mean my work isn’t inspired by it – and here I explain how Pink Floyd in general, and their brilliant track ‘Brain Damage’ in particular, helped to inspire my psychological noir novella ‘Raise the Blade’.

Floyd fans and the keen eyed amongst you will spot the obvious quote in the title, but it went quite a bit deeper than that with all sorts of hidden references (although no actual lyrics, for obvious copyright reasons).  I don’t spill the beans on what the references are (you can have fun spotting them when you read the book) but I do explain more about how the track worked its magic on me while I was writing the book.

You can find the post here, and many thanks to Sarah for taking the time out from Iceland Noir to host me, which can’t have been easy!

Blog Tour: Cheryl Rees-Price’s ‘Frozen Minds’

blog-tour-bannerFor a complete change today, I’m throwing open the Makovesky gates to Cheryl Rees-Price as part of her blog tour celebrating the release of her book ‘Frozen Minds’, a DI Winter Meadows book.  Welcome along, Cheryl, and thanks so much for such an entertaining article.


The antagonist is the character that we all love to hate. The love rival, the enemy, criminal or wicked stepmother. They are not always obvious and can have complex personalities.


When creating the cast for my books I like to start with the antagonist, for my genre this means a murderer, thief or abductor. My starting point is to think about what would cause an ordinary person to commit a crime such as murder. Is it something in their nature? An inherent evil?

There are plenty of examples in true crime. Serial killers who go on the rampage, killing random victims for some unfathomable reason. Among some of the most notorious and shocking British serial killers are Fred and Rose West, and Peter Sutcliffe. The Wests murdered at least 12 young women over a twenty year period including two of their own children. The motive appeared to be sexual. Peter Sutcliffe murdered 13 women over 5 years and attacked 7 others. Sutcliffe was described as a quiet man who was close to his mother. His first employment was as a mortuary worker where he showed no respect and was reported to use bodies as ventriloquist dummies. When arrested Sutcliffe claimed that while working at the mortuary he heard the voice of God commanding him to kill.


Using this premise a fictional serial killer would need to be complex, have a trigger, and a pattern which would enable the detective to track him/her down. For this type of antagonist the reader has no sympathy with the killer’s cause. Victims are random and time crucial. The tension propels the reader through the book, the goal is to catch the killer and place him/her behind bars.

If the motive for murder is not down to some inherent evil then it quite often involves, love, revenge, or money. Revenge is a powerful motive for murder and in fiction allows the reader, on some level, to sympathise and understand the antagonist. Avenging the loss of a loved one or punishing an abuser tugs on the heartstrings, that is, until it gets out of control and innocent characters get hurt to cover the truth.

These types of characters are still complex, they have to keep up a façade of normality while plotting their crime. The sweeter the character the more shocking to the readers. The vicar’s wife baking cakes for the old and infirm, the widower who always smiles and says good morning as he stands by his garden gate, or the school teacher, loved by the children. These characters have to blend in, be above suspicion and even throw suspicion on others. They have careers and families and have to be proficient at lies and deceit.


For my latest’s book I created an antagonist, who I hope, is likable.  Their back story is complex and they are forced into an unthinkable choice. (All this while hopefully not arousing suspicion.)

Whether we love or hate our antagonists, like good and evil they are necessary. Without them we wouldn’t have our story.

frozen-mindsFrozen Minds

When a man is found murdered at Bethesda House, a home for adults with learning difficulties, local people start to accuse the home’s residents of being behind the killing. The victim was a manager at the home, and seemingly a respectable and well-liked family man. DI Winter Meadows knows there’s more to the case than meets the eye. As he and his team investigate, Meadows discovers a culture of fear at the home – and some unscrupulous dealings going on between the staff. Does the answer to the case lie in the relationships between the staff and the residents – or is there something even more sinister afoot?


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Where the Heck Wednesday: Paul D Brazill

Another Wednesday rolls around and this week it’s the turn of the king of Brit-grit himself, Paul D Brazill, to take part in Where the Heck.  Thanks to Paul for shedding some light on the dark corners of London in his books.

Book titles: Guns of Brixton, Cold London Blues, A Rainy Night in Soho

Author: Paul D Brazill

Setting: London, UK

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‘Once our beer was frothy  but now its frothy coffee…’ – Fings Ain’t Wot They Used T’be by Lionel Bart

In 1959, the great Lionel Bart turned Frank Norman’s London set play ‘Fings Ain’t Wot They Used T’be’ into a musical comedy about ‘low-life characters in the 1950s, including spivs, prostitutes, teddy-boys and corrupt policemen’. This was a time of great change in post-war London – what with the ‘birth of the teenager’ and the Swinging Sixties looming on the horizon – and not everyone copes well with change, of course.

London is changing again, too, though not necessarily for the better.  Online, I see a litany of news stories about classic cinemas being converted into apartments for the super-rich and the destruction Tin Pan Alley – the home of British rock n roll. Indeed, the Soho of Bar Italia, Ronnie Scott’s, Norman and Jeff in The Coach and Horses, or Francis Bacon and Derek Raymond in The French House seems long dead or dying.

Ironically, the 50s coffee bars so disparaged in ‘Fings’ are now lamented as they are replaced with over-priced, homogenised sandwich bars and ‘frothy coffee’ seems decidedly risqué.

My books Guns Of Brixton, Cold London Blues, and A Rainy Night In Soho are violently comic tales of London low-life, occasionally rubbing shoulder with the high-life.  All three books focus on the Cook family – ageing London gangsters who aren’t adapting to change too well. All they have left is the shitty weather.

Here’s a clip from COLD LONDON BLUES :

‘Father Tim … looked out across the London skyline. The inky-black night had melted into a grubby-grey January morning. The city was waking now and the windows of the other granite tower blocks outside were starting to light up.

A cold wind, as sharp as a razor blade, sliced through him and Father Tim fastened his leather biker’s jacket as tightly as possible. Dark, malignant clouds crawled ominously across the sky.

‘Pissin’ miserable weather,’ he muttered to himself. ‘Pissin’ miserable country.’

He took a crushed packet of Marlborough cigarettes from the back pocket of his Levis, fished inside with shaking fingers.

On the opposite balcony, a tall man with long black hair took breadcrumbs from a plastic bag and threw them in the air. Black birds darted down from telephone lines where they had been lined up like notes on sheet music. The birds flew towards the tall man, landing on his balcony and sometimes on him. His raucous, joyous laughter brought an unfamiliar smile to Father Tim’s face.

On the street below, he could see a branch of a small general dealer with a bright green logo above the door, as well as an old bicycle factory that had recently been converted into a Wetherspoons pub, and a stretch of hip bars, including Noola’s Saloon, its green neon sign flickering intermittently.

The street bustled with the drunken debris of the previous night’s New Year’s Eve parties. The still-pissed and the newly hungover mingled.  A massive skinhead in a leopard skin coat walked up to Noola’s Saloon and pressed a door bell. The door opened emitting a screech of escaping metallic music as he slipped inside. Iggy and The Stooges’ ‘Search and Destroy.’ A sense of longing enveloped Father Tim. A feeling of time passing like grains of sand through his fingers.

Father Tim felt his rheumatism bite as he inhaled his first cigarette of the day. His chest felt heavy. If ever there was time to get the hell out of London it was probably now. The quack had told him to piss off to Spain, or somewhere as sunny, for a bit, for his health’s sake. It wasn’t a bad idea, either. He could even stay at his sister-in-law’s gaff in Andalucía if he wanted. But he knew he wouldn’t stay away for long. London was in his bones. His blood. His lungs. For better or for worse.’


Paul D. Brazill is the author of books like Cold London Blues, The Last Laugh, Guns Of Brixton, and Kill Me Quick! He was born in England and lives in Poland. He is an International Thriller Writers Inc. member whose writing has been translated into Italian, German, Polish, Finnish, and Slovene. He has had writing published in various magazines and anthologies, including The Mammoth Books of Best British Crime. He has even edited a few anthologies, including Exiles: An Outsider Anthology, and True Brit Grit.  His blog is here.


Interviewed… round the block

Raise the Blade FrontI’m delighted to announce that I’m interviewed at Christina Philippou’s super book blog ‘Writing Round the Block’ today.

Christina asked a whole range of simple yet surprisingly-tricky-to-answer questions which had me scratching my head and sucking the end of my pen.  Questions such as where I write, when I write, who my author heroes are, and what the inspiration behind ‘Raise the Blade’ was.

You can find my eventual responses, plus a whole lot of other wittering, over at Writing Round the Block.  I hope you enjoy the insight!

Where the Heck Wednesday: Gabriel Valjan

Here’s the latest in my Where the Heck series of guest blog posts and this week I’m delighted to welcome crime writer Gabriel Valjan, who writes an interesting ‘take’ on Brit-grit from an American’s point of view!

Over to you, Gabriel, and thanks for taking part.

Book title: Corporate Citizen

Author: Gabriel Valjan

Setting: Rome, Italy

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My latest novel, Corporate Citizen, is the fifth book in the Roma Series with my publisher, Winter Goose Publishing. The series is about a headstrong, extremely intelligent and mistrustful forensic accountant, Alabaster Black, who flees the United States after she realizes that her employer, Rendition, is taking extrajudicial action against people she has investigated. Alabaster assumes another identity, Bianca Nerini, in Italy, where she develops a close circle of friends. Without mentioning any spoilers, I’ll say that the Corporate Citizen is a two-part farewell to the English-speaking world for Bianca. Book Six, Crunch City, which will take place in London, introduces her to Surveillance State, and a tacit agreement between the US and the UK.

Although two books in the Roma Series take place in the US and include Bianca’s Italian team, I chose to anchor the Series in Italy because I’ve enjoyed Italian culture for decades, and it is fun and challenging to write about a foreign culture. Italian culture and language is extraordinarily diverse. I also choose Italy for another reason: the country was one of the last of the European countries with a viable socialist and communist platform. Italians, whether northern or southern (and there is a contrast), have a unique perspective on government, society, and family that is, at times, contrary to the American mindset.

I’ve discussed the challenges inherent in writing about a foreign culture at Writer Unboxed. Most writers ‘research’ their own feelings about the themes they explore, fact-check (I hope) the objective items during editing, and I think all of that is fun. Whatever we read and whenever we are pressed to ask ourselves what we think and feel about the human condition, we grow as a person. I find there is an exhilaration in creating a narrative from blank pages. You never where the journey will take you. I’m fortunate to have met or exchanged emails with readers and writers around the world. The writer’s life, the good life.


Gabriel Valjan is the author of the Roma Series from Winter Goose Publishing as well as numerous short stories. He lives in Boston, Massachusetts, where he enjoys the local restaurants, and his two cats, Squeak and Squawk, keep him honest to the story on the screen.

You can buy Corporate Citizen here:

Amazon UK: http://amzn.to/2fcJ61l

Amazon US: http://amzn.to/2erR7y1

Dark Minds coming soon

I’ve just had codarkmindsnfirmation that my short story My Own Eggsecutioner will be published in the first volume of charity anthology Dark Minds (ed. by Betsy Reavley) in mid-December.

Thanks to the generosity of those taking part (and the hard work of Betsy herself) there’ll be an incredible thirty-nine stories in the collection, by a range of crime and dark fiction authors, including some pretty ‘big’ names.  Included in this first volume are B A Morton, Paul D Brazill, K A Richardson, Steven Dunne, M A Comley, Lucy V Hay, and Alex Shaw, to name but a few.  And muggins, of course.

Even better news, the proceeds from the book now have a permanent (and hopefully welcoming) home in Hospice UK, the national charity for hospice care in the UK.  It’s an excellent cause and one I’m happy to be associated with.

I think I’m right in saying the book is still due out on 13th December (just in time for all those Christmas presents you should be buying *cough* hint *cough*) but I’ll confirm all details, where to order etc a little nearer the time.

Interview: The Author Interviews

I’m lucky enough to be interviewed by E Rachael Hardcastle at her blog today.  She asks a whole range of fun, make-you-think questions including where I get my ideas from, what I find difficult about writing, what I like about my particular genre, and what advice I would give to someone just starting out.

To see me witter on in response, do head over to her blog and take a look.  She’s also looking for further victims ooops I mean willing volunteers to interview so while you’re there, check out her guidelines to see if you could take part.


Demon Drink & Devil’s Porridge

Other Half and I had a lovely trip to Carlisle yesterday for Matt Hilton’s latest book launch.

For those of you who don’t know Matt, he writes the Joe Hunter series of crime thrillers, which runs to around thirteen books now and is very popular.  However, for this particular book, ‘Demon Drink & Devil’s Porridge’, he has changed tack somewhat.  The book contains seven short stories, still featuring crime, but set against the historical backdrop of the little-known State Management Scheme in Carlisle.

This dates from the First World War, when workers from the huge munitions factory at nearby Gretna descended on the pubs of Carlisle and drank too much.  Not only were the good citizens of Carlisle appalled at the drunken behaviour which followed, but alcohol and high explosives make for uneasy bedfellows.

Concerned for the safety and morality of all, and for the security of the war effort, in 1916 the Government stepped in, closed down many pubs, and took virtually all the others in the city and its outlying areas under their own control.  Pub landlords were recruited from the civil service, opening hours and alcohol amounts were reduced, and leisure pursuits such as bowling were introduced, to try to gentrify the pubs.

It must have been a reasonable success, because the scheme continued until 1973!  Now, under the auspices of the Carlisle City Centre Business Group, the SMS is being celebrated with a pub trail, permanent exhibitions, – and Matt’s book of stories.  Leaflets, maps and more information on the participating pubs are available at the State Management Story’s website, all of which makes fascinating reading.

As to the book launch, it was a riot.  Held at the Kings Head pub on Fisher Street (one of the original SMS establishments and a very attractive venue with a date stone of 1748 in an upstairs room), it was really well attended by Matt’s friends and fellow SMS enthusiasts.  We heard far more detail about the history of the original scheme, the plans to develop a combined hotel and SMS museum in the city centre, and even the filming of an episode of the recent BBC tv series Hairy Bikers: The Pubs That Built Britain, which featured the SMS scheme and several pubs in Carlisle.

And then Matt read one of the stories from the book, and we all fell about laughing.  I won’t give away the punchline, but I will say that the story was light-hearted and entertaining, but still conjured up all the atmosphere of 1916 city life – the sounds, the smells, and the lingering fear.  If all the stories are as good as that then shelling out a few quid for the book seems like a thoroughly good idea.  And you won’t even need the demon drink to help wash it down.  As to what the devil’s porridge was, you’ll just have to read the book to find out! (It’s available to order from Bookends bookshop in Carlisle.)

Where the heck Wednesday: Margot Kinberg

Welcome to another instalment of Where the Heck Wednesday, this time courtesy of crime writer (and fount of all knowledge when it comes to crime fiction!) Margot Kinberg.  Over to you, Margot!

Book Title: Past Tense

Setting: Pennsylvania, USA

Author: Margot Kinberg

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Thanks so much, Tess, for hosting me. A novel’s setting is an important part of what makes it work, so I really like the idea of a feature that’s devoted to settings. And I appreciate the chance to talk about the setting I chose for Past Tense.

Where’s the Book Set?

Past Tense takes place mostly on the quiet campus of (fictional) Tilton University, located in the US state of Pennsylvania. What’s interesting about that state is that it’s actually got several regions with different weather patterns and kinds of geography. So, to be more specific, the novel’s set in the (equally fictional) small town of Tilton, about two hours from Philadelphia. It’s not far from the rich farm country of the south-central part of the state, but Tilton itself isn’t a farming community.

Why That Location?

I’ve always liked college and university campuses. For one thing, they tend to be visually appealing. Many of them have beautiful groves of trees, gardens, lawns and so on. The older campuses also tend to have interesting, and sometimes quite lovely, buildings. And there are always stories associated with those buildings. I wanted a setting that would offer a blend of history, beauty and the opportunity to bring disparate people together. Nothing does that quite like a university campus.

Many US colleges and universities are located in small ‘college towns,’ and that’s the sort of place Tilton is. I wanted that atmosphere, because it allows for a lot of mixing of university and town, and that’s important in Past Tense. In fact, a few local characters are alumni of Tilton, and that plays a role in the novel. Small-town settings allow for that blend.

What Did it Entail?

Tilton University doesn’t exist. So in the sense of preparing, it was more a matter of creating a credible place than researching to get streets and so on right. But bits of it are based on my own experiences on university campuses, including the one I attended for my undergraduate degree. It’s been really interesting to check recent images of that campus to see how it’s evolved since I was a student. That particular campus has a beautiful open area with a grove of old oak trees, benches, paths, and so on. It’s really one of the hubs of the campus. The local squirrels know this, and are quite bold, even following unsuspecting people until they sit down and open up that sandwich or snack. The squirrels reconnoiter, plot their ambush strategies, and then clamber up the benches until they’re right next to anyone who sits there long enough with anything to eat. Then they use their ‘I’m so adorable you can’t possibly ignore me’ facial expressions until they’re fed. Woe betide the person who feeds them, though. The Pied Piper of Hamelin had nothing on a person who walks through that grove of trees after having fed even one squirrel. I may have to include marauding squirrels in my next mystery…


Margot Kinberg is a mystery novelist (she writes the Joel Williams series) and Associate Professor. She has also been blogging about crime fiction since 2009. She has written three Joel Williams novels (Publish or Perish, B – Very Flat, and Past Tense) and is currently revising the fourth. She is also the editor of the charity anthology In a Word: Murder.  Margot blogs at Confessions of a Mystery Novelist.

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Past Tense is available 1 November at Amazon.